Haloo guys ? :V back to my blog :v
I want to describe my school " aviation vocational school " in pekanbaru . datuk setya maharaja street or parit indah street . there is have 14 class and 3 department . tourism department , Administration department and airframe and powerplant . Everyday we have flag caremony . on tuesday and wednesday we use red and blue uniform . we have some ekstrakulikuler . that is grooming and swimming . wahaha so happy ! :D I hope I can Be a stewardess in here :D :) amiin ... :)
Novia, you still have the same mistake. You are not separate between identification and description. Keep learning!
BalasHapusPlease type the name of street in big letter, example Datuk Setia Maharaja.
BalasHapusYou should learn more about descriptive text
BalasHapusAttention on your text, I can not see the first paragraph and the second paragraph. you need to learn more about descriptive text specially about the generic structure of descriptive text.
BalasHapusAttention on generic structure of descriptive text
BalasHapusFollow generic structure of descriptive text Novia..
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