My Favorite Bear Doll
HALOOOOO GUYSSS ? :D
I have a favorite things , it is a doll .
usually i call his with the name "baby"
becase i love his so much . and i often hug my doll everynight before sleep .
the colour of my doll is blue . my boyfriend give a blue doll for me because i like blue .
so how about you ? what your favorite things ? :D
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BalasHapusPlease type I, not i
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BalasHapusThere are so many errors on your descriptive text such as the miss typing of because, the use of subject I not i and so on. but so far so good so nice.
BalasHapusThe correct title is "My Favorite Thing", because you only have 1 object to be described
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